Act 1: Beginning from the end (Complete)
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Re: Act 1: Beginning from the end
not really.. but.. I kept reading just because I voted "yes".. and I ussually keep my promises, even if I do them to some stupid poll on the forums
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That's why it's called 'Beginning from the end'. You establish a scenario and then you establish the characters. Then you re-introduce the scenario and then the impact hits you. Classic tactic.
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Interpretative dance!
The only way to really show your feelings.
The only way to really show your feelings.
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Re: Act 1: Beginning from the end
Maybe. Is the story good?
If you spent as much time writing as you did asking people if you should write, the next section would be one.
If you spent as much time writing as you did asking people if you should write, the next section would be one.
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Blink listen to me.. you should not pay so much atention on what people says.. look at me.. I suck writing in englilsh... nevertheless I wrote 7 chapters of THATso far (wich is not finished, just on vacations), and some of them were really appreciated among -certain kind of- people.
So.. what I'm about to say,seriously, is that if it makes you happy, or if it makes you feel better or good... just do it... write! it won't matter if not everybody reads it.. what will really matter is that somebody will like it eventually
God.. I got really deep here.. or too dumb.... Satan, Olaf please, don't say anything
So.. what I'm about to say,seriously, is that if it makes you happy, or if it makes you feel better or good... just do it... write! it won't matter if not everybody reads it.. what will really matter is that somebody will like it eventually
God.. I got really deep here.. or too dumb.... Satan, Olaf please, don't say anything
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Forget about trying to get an objective viewpoint. putting your opinions or your feelings out of that kind of critics is not worthy, besides. writing is about that, having someone who has something to say, and someone with the nerve to read it
whenever you try to get an objetive viewpoint, writing, literature, reading, or however you wanna name it stops making sence, because whenever you like something written by someone else it is because it matches your feelings or your opinions, even if it is written with awful grammar or syntax
whenever you try to get an objetive viewpoint, writing, literature, reading, or however you wanna name it stops making sence, because whenever you like something written by someone else it is because it matches your feelings or your opinions, even if it is written with awful grammar or syntax
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Re: Act 1: Beginning from the end (Complete)
Nice Work Blink... you are becoming as good as me (?)
no.. really.. .it is a "nice" thing you have written
I'm not trying to be Ironic...I'ts jus that nice doesn't actually fit this.. but there's no better word for it!!
no.. really.. .it is a "nice" thing you have written
I'm not trying to be Ironic...I'ts jus that nice doesn't actually fit this.. but there's no better word for it!!
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those changes do not affect my rating
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Well, it looks like you ripped off a bunch of stuff from the journal stories.
It's good writing, I just don't see where this is going. :/
It's good writing, I just don't see where this is going. :/
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